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Violence at school is really the big problem nowadays. No one can ensure that they can stop violence at school, but prevention can make a difference. The solution for preventing violence is numerous; however, we should concentrate on reducing family-school-community risk factors.

First of all, violence prevention starts in the home. Parents can start by being good role models, refraining from violence themselves and solving their problems peacefully. They should also be very involved in their children's lives; frequent discussions and discipline keep young people on the right track. It is especially important to talk about violence. Parents can ask their children about their thoughts and fears about school violence, and make it clear that they will not tolerate violent actions of any kind. 

Secondly, school also plays a special role in preventing violence because children are required to spend a large part of their young lives in schools. School should be a safe environment for students  to get knowledge and perfect personality. The staff of school need to develop a supportive and friendly atmosphere, violence prevention and  intervention programs, and an emphasis on the importance moral education to make schools safe. Teachers can also help by leading discussions on school violence topics to improve students' awareness.

Last but not least, preventing violence at school is not only efforts of parents and schools but also duty of the whole society. Change social and cultural conditions in order to reduce violence regardless of where the violence occurs such as reducing media violence, reshaping social norms which is no longer suitable , and restructuring educational systems. One can not solve the problem completely. However, when each person extends a hand to help reduce violence , everything will be better.

It is everyone's responsibility to keep schools safe by working together and raising awareness of the danger of school violence. To stop the violence in school is not a week, a month or a year task, but it's a process of a generation or more